Foreshortening

Okay so my favorite artist is Mark Crilley for all his practical yet hilarious how-to videos and such. I needed some practice with foreshortening so I watched Mark's video youtu.be/lvcGW_U3nFs

If I've done anything wrong proportionally, let me know. An artist wouldn't be very good unless they continued learning, right?

p.s. Mark, I figured it would be more interesting if I didn't just copy yours completely. (even though it's a wonderful picture.)

Supplies: Crayola colored pencils(Raspberry, lime green, lemon yellow, black, sand, pink, turquoise), Prismacolor Scholar 9 graphite drawing set.

Enjoy! :3